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Surfer Dust - poem

6/17/2020

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​As you sleep,
The dust by my window
Dances in the sunlight;
Swirling specs of glinting gold
Riding air currents
Like minuscule surfers. 
 
As the dawn and I kiss your brow,
I wonder how many surfers are yours
And which ones are mine.
When did they part with our flesh,
Freeing themselves to be wind-riders,
Slaves to the air?
 
Over distant seas,
Our surfers soar with the breeze,
Above plankton, slaves to the surf.
Have we tasted wine in Sicily?
Were we exhaled by a Sei whale?
 
You awaken suddenly
And stir the dust.
The soft shimmer spins
About your head
Like a living halo.
Surfers merge. 
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Lyrics: "Carpenter of Time"

11/5/2014

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"John Harrison (24 March 1693 – 24 March 1776) was a self-educated English carpenter and clockmaker. He invented the marine chronometer, a long-sought device in solving the problem of establishing the longitude of a ship at sea, thus revolutionising and extending the possibility of safe, long distance sea travel in the Age of Sail. The problem was considered so intractable that the British Parliament offered a prize of £20,000 (comparable to £2.87 million in modern currency) for the solution."  -Wikipedia 

After watching a particular scene from "Longitude", based on the book by Dava Sobel, I wrote the following piece. The scene takes place between John Harrison and his friend, Lieutenant John Campbell. In a moment of discouragement, Harrison exclaims: "When you're young, you think everything's possible, but as you grow older, you discover that it isn't." Campbell quickly replies, "Well then, don't grow older, Mr. Harrison". Lines like that beg to become folk songs.


"Carpenter of Time" 

Standing by the surf,
Watching ships sail on the tide,
Salt breeze in my hair,
And sailors on my mind;
I think of those who perished
Upon treacherous seas,
But also, I remember those
Saved by a silver watch.

Don't grow older, Mr. Harrison
As you watch decades fly
On your golden clock tick by,
Keep your sight, hold your dream-
You are the carpenter of time.

Measuring longitude, invisible meridians
Spanning all across the globe
In neat, consistent lines,
Like a football field
Stretched around a sphere.
As we seize and score the goals
Of peace and war and foes
The lines remain as we redraw our maps.

Don't grow older, Mr. Harrison
As you watch decades fly
On your golden clock tick by,
Keep your sight, hold your dream-
You are the carpenter of time.

Those who chart the stars
Grow old and lose the time,
Following straight lines,
While you explore the curve.
All truths begin as heresy,
Sheep resent the change,
But shepherds hold the staffs;
Shepherds lead the herds.

Don't grow older, Mr. Harrison
As you watch decades fly
On your golden clock tick by,
Keep your sight, hold your dream-
You are the carpenter of time.

When you're young,
All things are possible;
Hope's a constant guide,
Love can hold the tide,
Every river may grow wide,
But as seasons drift away,
Doubt impedes ambition.
Vision uses more than just the eye.

Don't grow older, Mr. Harrison
As you watch decades fly
On your golden clock tick by,
Keep your sight, hold your dream-
You are the carpenter of time.
You are the carpenter of time. 
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Book Review: "Miracles & Mischief: Meringue for your Brain" by Vernon Crumrine

9/21/2013

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True to its title, "Miracles & Mischief" by Vernon Crumrine is a tasty cerebral treat.  The audio version, read by Peter Bohush, is a half-hour of poetic pie that satiates the senses and exercises the brain.

Bohush's rich vocal talents are a delightful complement to Crumrine's words, painting an array of scenes and visions; ideas and reflections.  Topics range from Marilyn Monroe to motorcycle crashes; the nature of the Universe to children's take on Love.   

Vernon expresses complex thoughts in simple yet eloquent words, making even the largest themes digestible and, at times, comedic.  Also sharing his own personal experiences, the reader (or listener) is invited to take a peek through Vernon's pair of World-Windows.

Mark Twain once said, "My works are like water. The works of the great masters are like wine, but everyone drinks water.".  I'm not one to compare any writer's words to that of another, but I would say Twain's statement surely applies to Vernon Crumrine.
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Album Review: Simple & Sweet - "When You Leave"

8/22/2013

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​Listening to When You Leave, Irish singer Greg Kavna's new album, I am first struck by its soothing simplicity.  Accompanied only by an acoustic guitar, Kavna's every smoky nuance is captured; a voice so smooth requires no frills. Kavna exhibits impressive vocal range and control, allowing him to express the full spectrum of feeling. 

The recordings themselves are a little raw, but very pure, further showcasing Kavna's talents.  His simple lyrics evoke complex emotion.  His heartfelt words are only glimmers in the constellation of voice and notes. 

The title track has a sorrowful, jazzy feel to it.  Maybe it's the echoing words, maybe the whispering tenor tones, but this song is decidedly haunting... in a good way!  Contrarily, "Suzanne & Victoria" is a whimsical, lighthearted piece with clear, sweet vocals and clear, sweet lyrics.  "What Am I To Do?" expresses confusion in love.  Sometimes there is a fine line between love and hate, leaving one torn.  All one can do is "surrender".  

I am a folkie and lover of acoustic guitar.  Kavna has a beautiful style, and I was very glad he opted to include an instrumental piece on this album. "Angie" is everything I look for in a guitar piece: perfect picking, driving sound, and intricate adornments. Greg's guitar-playing is definitely a strong point of his music.

"Don't Turn Away" is another emotional song, urging one to feel and "just do", which is perhaps better left in song than applied in life. Once again Kavna showcases his superb vocals and instrumentation.  "Stay" is a dreamy, hypnotic song, softly urging the listener to "stay".  "Summer Days" describes a love turned cold, evoking images of a fast-coming autumn.  I greatly enjoyed the lyrics on this one.  A nostalgic, wistful way to end the album. 

Overall, When You Leave is a highly enjoyable collection of songs.  Truly exceptional vocals and beautiful guitar-playing.  If there is a weak point, it would be the lyrics. However, love can be as simple as it is complex, so I would argue simple lyrics are just as effective. 
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    Katrina Fleisher is a Bard & Business Owner hailing from Boca Raton, FL. Jill of all Trades with a penchant for Poetry. 

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